Congratulations Zakariya

We would like to congratulate our young writer Zakariya Mohammad who recently entered the  The Poetry Society’s Pop Culture Poetry Challenge – a national competition – with his wonderful poem written in our Popular Culture workshop in November 2021. His submission impressed the judges and was long listed! Well done Zakariya!  His inspiring poem Ode to My Minecraft Pig can be read and appreciated below. We are sure you will be impressed too!

To read the winning entries click here: https://ypn.poetrysociety.org.uk/workshop/super-mario-fidget-spinners-beyonce-the-pop-culture-poetry-challenge/

An Ode to My Minecraft Pig

*popular culture shapes our lives, and language. Some of the terms used in this poem are representative this

Dear Minecraft pig,

Alone. Yet together

Input blocks transform to output cubes

I love your multiple faces, and sharp corners

Pink as you skuttle in a colourful land,

The plodding of your feet like the drums from a band

 

Part of a passive mob* you may be

But beware! Thudding axes, exploding TNT

A fantastic source of meat if you hit the floor

But don’t strife, you have eternal life, spawn* for more

 

You graze on grassy biomes, hogging the spotlight

Oh little pig! Time to join my plight

Saddle up, follow the carrot

Through the tiniest cavity

 

Greek islands, dragon ball, fantasy castle,

we have them all.

Kaiosama’s world, Survival Island, Rocky Mountains,

You’re even present on the highlands.

Romans?… Ancient Egypt? … Stonehenge perhaps?

Little pig, You’re my companion to them all.

 

Without you my friend, I would be uninspired

in a blank white room. Lonely.

Zakariya Mohammed aged  9

Author

Helena

Helena Steel founded the Story Room in 2013 and has never looked back. She has tutored children for their 11-plus exams for the past 17 years and is a partner at www.succeed11plusmocks.co.uk She is in awe of children’s minds; how they can absorb and retain information, their brilliant creativity and how they can improve across the whole curriculum (including foreign languages, science and maths) with a little help with their English. She studied Law at UCL, is a qualified solicitor, a published poet and has been a judge on the BBC 500 words competition.She has helped hundreds of children gain entry to schools including; City of London (girls and boys), St.Pauls, Dame Alice Owens, Latymer, Henrietta Barnet, Queen Elizabeth Boys, Haberdashers (girls and boys), St Albans, Channing, St Michael’s Catholic School, U.C.S, Dubai College (U.E.A), Sevenoaks, Highgate, Merchant Taylor, Benedeen, North London Collegiate, Highgate, Mill Hill, Palmers Green High, St John’s (Enfield), Queenswood, Haileybury and more...

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