This Saturday we looked at similes and metaphors with some amazing stories being written by our young writers. We even had some time for poetry! Children are natural poets so it is always a pleasure to write with them. Here is some of their work…
OUR FAMILIES (and other animals)
My dad is like a squirrel because he always hides all the treats 
and then eats them.
My brother is like a cockerel because he wears colourful clothes
My dad is like a giraffe because he is so tall
and my mum is like an octopus because she does lots of things
at the same time
My dad is like a fox because he is sly and cunning
My brother is a rabbit because he is soft
My baby sister is a sea horse because she cannot walk
and she is very slow.
OUR WISHES
I wish my hoover could hoover all my thoughts
and make them into reality. (Khalil)
I wish I had self cleaning teeth. (Hasan)
I wish I could talk to plants (Naima)
I wish my car would fly by itself
and print out £50 notes. (Sona)
I wish my candle would light up when I click my fingers
I wish I could breathe under water and (Kai)
I wish colds did not exist (Izabela)
We hope you enjoyed our poems!
Angels Gimeno
Want to know more about Saturday Writing Club? Call Helena 07970 10 75 18
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